Thursday, October 22, 2009

Lesson 3: Describing a Person


Sleeping Baby

Caleb snoozes in a snug, woolly sleeping bag inside his cozy car seat. Closed, blue eyes point his long lashes down to chubby cheeks and a small nose. A silent mouth sometimes twitches in his deep sleep. Straight and soft, my little nephew’s red-brown hair reaches all the way down to his tiny ears. The 10-week-old infant wears a cream onesie covered in gold lions and chestnut dogs driving blue cars, but he does not notice this playful pattern in his slumber. A yellow ribbon connects a delightfully unneeded pacifier to a blue and white zebra clip on his shirt. Hopefully, the sleeping baby will continue napping so we may enjoy his adorable, quiet face.

1 comment:

  1. Excellent descriptive writing, Justine! Even without the photo, I can imagine little Caleb as you describe him. Keep up the great work.

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